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I’m hiring an experienced beta reader / light developmental editor for my dark fantasy novel UNWRITTEN: Companions – Until the Last Light (59,036 words). This manuscript has already completed two beta reads and undergone a targeted surgical revision. I am now seeking fresh, professional eyes to critically assess the revised version for clarity, emotional impact, pacing, and narrative cohesion. This is not an early-draft review. This is a post-revision evaluation focused on refining the story’s effectiveness and ensuring the emotional and structural elements land as intended. Scope of Work: You will provide detailed, structured feedback on: Emotional resonance and character arcs Pacing and tension flow Scene effectiveness and engagement Narrative clarity and potential confusion points Continuity or logic gaps Overall story cohesion and reader experience Feedback should be thoughtful, specific, and actionable. This Project Does NOT Include: Line editing or proofreading Grammar corrections AI-generated feedback Surface-level “I liked it / I didn’t like it” reactions Ideal Candidate: Proven experience in beta reading or developmental editing Strong familiarity with dark fantasy and character-driven narratives Ability to provide professional, honest critique Clear written communication with structured notes Deliverables: Written feedback document outlining observations and recommendations Highlighted sections or notes referencing specific areas of concern or excellence Manuscript Details: Genre: Dark Fantasy Word Count: 59,036 Status: Post-revision, structurally refined Please include in your proposal: Relevant experience Prior beta reading or editorial work Examples or testimonials (if available) Your approach to providing actionable feedback This project prioritizes precision, emotional impact, and narrative integrity. I’m seeking a reader who can help ensure the manuscript performs at its highest level before progressing to the next stage.